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The air is cold.
You don't want to breathe.
Suffocate me.
Suffocate me.
My lungs implode and,
it's cold, so cold.

The knife is sharp;
The light is blinding.
Impale me and
numb my eyes.

That water is boiling.
You want me to fry.
Dive in.
Dive in.
Turn into steam and,
it's hell, fucking hell.

The gun is loaded;
That man's a rapist.
Shoot me and
tell him I'm helpless.

The dog is rabid.
You don't like when i bleed
Bait it.
Bait it.
I like his teeth in me and,
his mouth is foaming, foamy.

The garroter is ready;
That cup is poison.
Give him my neck and
give me a drink.

The feeling is crazy.
You want to love me.
Release me.
Release me.
I want you too; I can't and,
You love me anyway.
©2004-2009 ~Balletbabymari
:iconballetbabymari:

Author's Comments

i have no idea what this is. it came out of nowhere, but it's not going to be journal poetry or a scrap or something, because it's part of the expression that i leave it more or less unchanged. i guess it's me being scared.

boo

now you're the scared one. ha.

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:iconpenniless:
holy fucking shit!

that was pretty damn good.
:fav:

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you sweet talk like a cop and you know it
:iconpenniless:
okay I know :fav: isn't one. bear w/me.

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you sweet talk like a cop and you know it
:iconkillchain:
Very nice. +fav

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:iconballetbabymari:
thank you so much. i appreciate the :+fav: :D

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:iconthe-sohi:
numb my eyes

i think u just managed to disturb me down to my soul. whoa this is scary. and its nder romance, would that be little signs of and hints at sado masochism?

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:meditate:
i ask of life,
not to be part of something, but to be part for something.
:iconballetbabymari:
lmao. it's about doing things you don't want to in love. The mean things are just methaphors for how a boy might fall in love with a girl, even when she doesn't want love, or if she does, she might have to do things she doesn't want to... i dunno.

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:iconfrankienexus:
fear can be taken, made huge, made into such lethal things in our mind, specially fear that comes form the giving of the self that love demands. and that fear is a true fear, its a subtle hidden fear which hardly anybody understands

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I love your comments and your textures

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